Should you open with dialog or not, that is the question

Jean M. Cogdell's avatarJean's Writing

If you must, keep it short and sweet.

Has it been done? Of course! Does that mean we should try it? That’s a loaded question.

The first line is how we, the writers, introduce our story to the reader. It’s how we shake hands, say hello, howdy, nice to meet you or whatever greeting we choose to grab the reader’s attention.

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The first line can’t be wasted words.

When a story is opened with dialog, will the reader know who is speaking? If not, the author must backtrack, and pretty quick, to show who is talking and why. This can become confusing fast.

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I’m not sure that I’m that talented of a writer.

If using dialog to open a story, it must reveal the character, and support, highlight or assist action. The dialog can be captivating, and attention grabbing, but it cannot be just for the sake of conversation. Just like any opening line, it must hook…

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Featured Author: John W. Howell

brittneysahin's avatarbrittneysahin

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I am excited to introduce author John W. Howell. The sequel to My GRL – His Revenge is a new story, continuing where My GRL left off! After reading the blurb to HIS REVENGE, I know it will be a book that I’ll enjoy & I definitely added it to my TBR list!

“I thoroughly enjoyed the further adventures of John Cannon. The fast-paced plot and memorable characters kept me engaged. Endings tie up each novel, yet leave plenty of room for readers to want more.” Bette A. Stevens – Author of Dog Bone Soup.

Blurb:

America loves John Cannon, its newest hero, and the President wants to present him with the highest civilian medal for bravery for saving the Annapolis midshipman from a terrorist plot to destroy them. While in Washington for the award ceremony, John unwillingly becomes an accomplice in another plan by the same group to attack the credibility of…

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